# Resume buzzwords to avoid and what to write instead

> Words like “results-driven” and “team player” claim a quality without proving it. A table of resume buzzwords with concrete replacements, and how to fix yours.

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Avoid resume words that claim a quality without proving it: “results-driven,” “team player,” “hard-working,” “detail-oriented,” “dynamic” and “responsible for.” Anyone can write them, so they tell a reader nothing about you. Replace each one with the evidence behind it: what you did, how much, and what changed. Keep the technical terms and exact phrases from the job posting. Those are keywords, not buzzwords.

## Key takeaways

- A buzzword is a claim. Its replacement is proof: “detail-oriented” becomes “reconciled about 1,200 invoices a month with no audit findings.”
- Test every phrase with two questions. Could any applicant write it? Could you delete it without losing a fact?
- Openers such as “responsible for,” “helped with” and “worked on” hide what you did. Start with the verb for the action itself.
- Keywords from the posting stay: tools, methods, certifications and job titles are facts.
- Fix the summary first. It is where buzzwords cluster.

## What counts as a resume buzzword?

A buzzword is a word or phrase that sounds like a qualification but carries no information. Resume buzzwords come in four families:

- **Self-praise:** results-driven, hard-working, motivated, dynamic, passionate, detail-oriented.
- **Vague openers:** responsible for, helped with, worked on, involved in, duties included.
- **Corporate jargon:** synergy, leverage, value-add, move the needle, think outside the box.
- **Filler:** very, highly, successfully, various, a wide range of.

The US government’s plain language guidance defines jargon as complicated language used to impress, rather than to inform, your audience. That is a useful test for a resume line: is it there to impress or to inform?

Career offices give the same advice. UC Berkeley’s School of Information tells students to avoid meaningless buzzwords but include keywords in context, and specifically not to say things like “skilled communicator.”

The last point matters, because the two get confused.

| | Buzzword | Keyword |
| --- | --- | --- |
| What it is | A quality you claim | A skill, tool, method or credential you have |
| Example | Strategic thinker | Demand forecasting, SQL, PMP |
| Can a reader verify it? | No | Yes |
| What to do | Replace it with evidence | Use the posting’s exact wording, in context |

The guide to [resume keywords](https://jobbie.bot/blog/resume-keywords) shows how to find the terms worth keeping.

## Resume buzzwords and what to write instead

The replacements below are illustrations with invented figures. Yours need to be true, and an honest estimate marked “about” is fine.

| Instead of | The problem | Write something like |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Results-driven | Names no result | Grew renewal revenue 18% in a year by rebuilding the 90-day outreach sequence |
| Team player | Everyone says it | Worked with two designers and a data analyst to ship a new onboarding flow in six weeks |
| Hard-working, self-starter | Effort is not an outcome | Taught myself Python and automated a weekly report that used to take four hours |
| Detail-oriented | Unproven, and undone by a single typo | Reconciled about 1,200 invoices a month with no findings in two annual audits |
| Excellent communication skills | Tells; does not show | Presented quarterly results to a 40-person leadership group and wrote the release notes sent to 9,000 customers |
| Strong leadership skills | No one was led, as far as the reader knows | Led a team of 7 through a warehouse move with no missed shipments |
| Responsible for | Describes the job, not you | Managed a $250,000 events budget across 14 trade shows |
| Helped with, assisted in | Hides your part | Wrote the test plan and ran most of the test cases for the billing migration |
| Proven track record | Asserts proof without giving it | Beat quota in 7 of the last 8 quarters |
| Think outside the box, innovative | Names no idea | Proposed selling returned stock on a clearance page, which recovered $30,000 in a quarter |
| Go-to person | Vague status | Chosen by the director to train all 12 new hires on the billing system |
| Fast learner | Unproven | Earned the required certification within three months of moving into the role |
| Seasoned professional | Says only that time has passed | Nine years in commercial lending, the last four managing a $60M portfolio |
| Synergy, leverage, utilize | Inflated words for simple actions | Merged the sales and support ticket queues, which cut duplicate tickets by a quarter |

Every replacement does the same three things. It starts with a verb, it includes a number or a named thing, and it could only have been written by the person who did it.

## How to replace a buzzword with evidence

1. **Mark the suspects.** Go through your resume and highlight every adjective about yourself and every “responsible for,” “helped” and “worked on.”
2. **Ask what earned the word.** For each one, ask: what did I do that would make a colleague describe me this way? If you called yourself organized, what did you organize?
3. **Write the event.** Use a verb, the thing you acted on, the scale and the result. MIT’s career office calls factual accomplishments the best way to show your impact, and says to quantify if you can.
4. **Add a number.** If there is no revenue or percentage, use a count, a frequency, a time saved, a team size or a deadline met. The guide to [resume accomplishments](https://jobbie.bot/blog/resume-accomplishments) has prompts for finding them.
5. **Delete the original word.** If the sentence loses nothing, the word was filler.

Here is the method applied to a summary.

```Summary: before
Results-driven, highly motivated marketing professional with a proven track record of success. Excellent communicator and team player who thinks outside the box.
```

```Summary: after
Email and lifecycle marketer with six years in B2B software. Rebuilt onboarding emails for a 40,000-user product, lifting trial-to-paid conversion from 9% to 12%. Experienced in marketing automation, SQL and A/B testing.
```

The first version could describe anyone in any field. The second names a specialty, a length of experience, one result and three skills a recruiter can search for. More patterns are in these [resume summary examples](https://jobbie.bot/blog/resume-summary-examples).

## Weak verbs and filler words to cut

Some phrases are not buzzwords so much as padding. The same plain language guidance advises asking whether each word provides value and cutting excess modifiers such as “really” and “very.” On a resume, the usual offenders are these.

| Cut or replace | With |
| --- | --- |
| Responsible for managing | Managed |
| Assisted with the preparation of | Prepared, or the part you did: “Drafted the budget section of” |
| Was involved in | The action you took |
| Successfully completed | Completed |
| Conducted an analysis of | Analyzed |
| Utilized | Used, or a more exact verb such as “built” or “queried” |
| On a daily basis | Daily |
| In order to | To |
| Very, highly, extremely | Nothing. Delete them. |
| Various, numerous, a wide range of | The actual number |

A stronger verb does not have to be a fancier one. “Led,” “built,” “cut,” “wrote” and “trained” beat “spearheaded” and “orchestrated,” because the plain verb says exactly what happened. For verbs sorted by the kind of work, see this list of [resume action verbs](https://jobbie.bot/blog/resume-action-verbs). Purdue’s Online Writing Lab also keeps a categorized list, and the guide to [resume bullet points](https://jobbie.bot/blog/resume-bullet-points) shows how to build a full line around one.

## When should a buzzword stay?

- **When the posting uses it as a requirement.** If the posting asks for “cross-functional collaboration” or “stakeholder management,” use the phrase, attached to evidence: “Ran weekly cross-functional reviews with engineering, legal and sales.”
- **When it is a real term in your field.** GAAP, HIPAA, CI/CD and triage are jargon to outsiders and precise to the people hiring you. The plain language guidance says that avoiding jargon does not mean cutting necessary technical terms.
- **When the posting asks for a soft skill.** Do not list it. Show it in a bullet, as the guide to [skills to put on a resume](https://jobbie.bot/blog/skills-for-resume) explains.

The same rule holds in a cover letter and on a LinkedIn profile: use the word only where a fact stands next to it.

## Frequently asked questions

### What are buzzwords on a resume?

They are words and phrases that sound impressive but give no information, such as “results-driven,” “team player,” “dynamic” and “proven track record.” Because any applicant can use them, they do not distinguish you. Replace them with specific actions and results.

### What words should you not use on a resume?

Avoid self-praise (“hard-working,” “detail-oriented”), vague openers (“responsible for,” “helped with”), corporate jargon (“synergy,” “leverage”) and filler (“very,” “various”). Also drop “I,” “me” and “my.” Use verbs, numbers and the names of tools and methods instead.

### Is “responsible for” bad on a resume?

It is weak, because it describes the job and not what you did in it. Replace it with the verb for the action and add scale: “Responsible for the events budget” becomes “Managed a $250,000 events budget across 14 trade shows.”

### Are buzzwords and keywords the same thing?

No. A buzzword is a quality you claim, such as “strategic thinker.” A keyword is a skill, tool, method, credential or job title from the posting, such as “demand forecasting” or “SQL.” Remove buzzwords and keep keywords, placed where you used them.

### What can I say instead of “team player” on a resume?

Describe a time you worked with others and what the group produced: who was involved, what you contributed and the result. For example, “Worked with two designers and a data analyst to ship a new onboarding flow in six weeks.”

### Do buzzwords help a resume get past screening software?

Generic adjectives are not qualifications, so there is no reason for a screen to look for them. What a posting asks for is skills, tools, credentials and experience. Put those on the page in the posting’s own words, and spend the space you save on evidence.

## Sources

- [Digital.gov: Avoid jargon](https://digital.gov/guides/plain-language/principles/avoid-jargon): the definition of jargon and the point that necessary technical terms can stay.
- [Digital.gov: Short and simple](https://digital.gov/guides/plain-language/principles/short-simple): asking whether each word adds value and cutting excess modifiers.
- [UC Berkeley School of Information: Resume Basics](https://www.ischool.berkeley.edu/careers/guides/resume): avoiding meaningless buzzwords while keeping keywords in context.
- [MIT Career Advising & Professional Development: Resumes](https://capd.mit.edu/resources/resumes/): factual accomplishments, quantifying, and avoiding the first person.
- [Purdue Online Writing Lab: Action Verbs List](https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/job_search_writing/preparing_an_application/action_verbs_to_describe_skills_jobs_and_accomplishments_in_employment_documents/action_verbs_list.html): a categorized list of action verbs for resumes and cover letters.